Breathe love


Breathe love

So many days with blank skies,
tasteless cobalt whirlpools,
radiance in tangerine falling apart and
the sound of my broken heart
beating always the same,
leering at caverns to fit the resonance.

Chasing imaginary trains,
the ground started spinning and
I reached you through rainbows.
In your eyes I found glue for
the clouds of my broken sparkles,
there is no trace of past agony left.

The sun is rising again, almost,
and in your words the world is safe,
I don’t need wall of endless wires.
In your smile I see a line of stars,
in your arms I’ve found the ocean’s touch,
through your kiss I breathe love …


Image by Anna- Mariaa on DeviantArt


© 2011  Broken Sparkles


32 Responses to “Breathe love”

  1. Eric Says:

    Wow! Sensual and romantic!

    Nice piece, Sparkly One!

  2. souldipper Says:

    Yum!! The picture goes perfectly with your poem, Blaga!


    Picture perfect poem,I love the way new found confidence and love pulses through these verses!

  4. eclipseofthemoon Says:

    Wow Blaga! I wanted to press that *like* button at least three times…. :)

  5. Blossom Dreams Says:

    Your last stanza is simply fantastic! Love the image you have posted with your poem too xx

  6. wendywoo20 Says:

    I enjoyed visiting here. This poem reads very well.
    The layout of the words is just right too.
    I would to see this with music in the background.

  7. Tom Baker Says:

    Amazing Blaga. What a work of art. How have you been lately? I hope you are doing alright. Any news on where you will be moving to yet?

  8. liv2write2day Says:

    This is breathtaking, Blaga. Long and hope all mixed into one poem.

  9. yelena m. Says:

    I have no words enough for that…just brilliant ,Blaga…gives hope for the sun to rise…

  10. Jamie Dedes Says:

    Delightfully romantic and upbeat. I love the infusion of color and waves of spinning and rising. Bravo! Another lovely to delight mind and imagination. Thank you, dear Blaga.

  11. Midnight Orgasm Says:

    It is so amazing that you do not simply use words, but rather breathe life to them, one by one, with focus.

  12. Olivia Says:

    That is so romantic…………
    Drrr-ee-aaaa-mmm-y!! Loved the imagery.. :) xx

  13. Kavita Says:

    How absolutely warm and romantic, Summer Gal…
    I just melted in your words here… and could soooo relate to it too! There was sheer magic in this poem, sweetie… just like there is magic in the eyes of a loved one…


  14. deadpoet88 Says:

    Wow girl! Too good, love the romantic feeling in this.

  15. Cherlyn Says:

    I ignored the picture because I find Twilight anything but romantic :P, and your poem is everything romantic and more! What a wonderfully written poem, it was sensual without being too sensual, and romantic but left you wanting more – which is what good romance should have :). Thank you for sharing!

    • Broken Sparkles Says:

      I know many people find Twilight … let’s say not good, but they mostly refer to the movies. For me Twilight is the books and they were good and romantic :) Thanks Cherlyn!

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