Special day

Special Day

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Words, sigh of understanding, a little late
and lost in the traffic of feverish sensation,
knocked on the door of my heart. Confused and
unsure, because of the unexpected visit
in the so unusual hour, I carefully explored
the letters one by one and decided to let them in.

It’s hard, but I confess, hope for the day
when our story will begin is here again.
This time the Universe is with us.
Can you hear the whisper of the spell?
Can you see winter in its coat?
And summer building a bridge between me and you?

This day I will become yours and only,
without fear, engaging in lavender’s forever,
for our hearts to finally live together.
And if before we played games,
chasing unattainable wilderness,
now peace will rule within.

Like on the end of every ball with masks
when people reveal their faces,
on the end of this day, we will lay open our bodies
and let them become one with an unspoken appeal,
let them feel love, no jealousy and selfishness.

This day I will know, I shouldn’t seek an escape,
I will stand and face all sunrises and sunsets.
But until then, you keep safe the love you feel for me
and I will bond with every single fairy, from every
fairytale existing, to make that day as special as it can be …

~

“Ball masks” by SevenDeadlySins Inc. on DeviantArt

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© 2011  Broken Sparkles

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29 Responses to “Special day”

  1. souldipper Says:

    You write of strength and courage to give. Well written, Blaga.

  2. Rashmi Says:

    Beautiful poem with feelings….

  3. Jingle Says:

    Glad to see you find your confidence…

    thanks for taking the award.
    Happy Rally.

    :)

  4. Artswebshow Says:

    Powerful writing Blaga.
    Impressive

  5. Chimnese Says:

    you are very courageous in your poetry, your strength and the voice that you express, the most important thing about an poetess, she has a voice, each poet got there own taste, but your poetry always develop from a fairy tale giving it life in itself.amzing ability to have.

  6. Iwrite4u Says:

    Skillful writeup…well written Blaga :)

  7. Jamie Dedes Says:

    Oh how I do love the metaphor of the masks. So profound and pungent at many levels. Another fine poem. There is strength here.

    Thank you!

    Big hugs from the Bay area … Thanks for your visits, comments, and emails, Blaga.

    Cheers! and be well, my friend.

  8. Isabel Bush Says:

    Congrats on the award! beautiful write.

  9. Peggy Nolan Says:

    Wistful, longing, a sense of wonder with a hint of melancholy. I don’t usually like this kind of poetry, but you have written it well.

  10. kshawnedgar Says:

    Beautiful! The universe is with you.

  11. Iris D Says:

    What depth of perception is displayed here. Great metaphor of mask and your imagery is great.
    Another great poem!!

  12. JL Dodge Says:

    This is beautiful Blaga !
    Happy Rally
    ENJOY
    JL&B

  13. dragonkatet Says:

    Oh, I hope it happens for you just the way you’ve written it here! You do deserve a special day just like this. I could feel the hesitation, but also the triumph of hope over fear. :)

  14. The Reason You Come Says:

    This reminds me of lonely yet hopeful nights in my room, reminiscing and fantasizing alone. It will happen!

  15. Ina Says:

    lovely and full of romance. let this special day happen! :)

  16. eclipseofthemoon Says:

    So impressive and powerful Blaga, beautifully written!

  17. mitu Says:

    It’s beautiful. don’t judge me for saying this but ‘awww….’. loved it :)

  18. mindlovemisery Says:

    Very touching and romantic =)

  19. Sam Says:

    What a beautiful promise Blaga…

  20. Blossom Dreams Says:

    Such beauty in your words! I especially love these ones: “I will stand and face all sunrises and sunsets…” I find those words filled with strength and optimism!

    Chloe xx

  21. Someone is Special Says:

    blaga, i love this.. Here is my rally post, ~ come on idiot, you are for me ~

    ! Happy Sunday !

    Someone is Special

  22. liv2write2day Says:

    This is a masterpiece of metaphor. This stanza amazed:

    Like on the end of every ball with masks
    when people reveal their faces,
    on the end of this day, we will lay open our bodies
    and let them become one with an unspoken appeal,
    let them feel love, no jealousy and selfishness.

  23. TeriC Says:

    Wow, just so beautiful and so effective!

  24. Olivia Says:

    Mind-blowingly beautifulllllllll!!
    The image is in perfect harmony.. very well done!!

    Warm wishes for your special day My Dear Sparkling Bubble Fairy.. xox

  25. Becky Says:

    Loved this one Blaga!
    So perfect.

  26. meiro Says:

    Lovely and romantic…. as always.
    All blessing.

  27. Cherlyn Says:

    Congrats on the award, and an amazing romantic poem as well :) These lines “This day I will know, I shouldn’t seek an escape, I will stand and face all sunrises and sunsets” really made me think of Gone With the Wind for some reason. Thank you for sharing!


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