In the silence

In the silence

I wake up and I look
in the distance again,
the skies have inhaled
your trails and the indigo
scent I desire, it aches.

Paper smile is all I have,
ambrosial eyes inviting me,
dauntless my heart is, but only
an illusion is streaming with
the wind that comes so near.

From all the places I’ve been,
in the land of dreams about you,
I found the most angelic shimmer.
The red juice in my veins,
blazing just for a word from you.

In the silence I build castles,
your face dwells with me,
the taste of a whimsical kiss,
the hint of hands in hands
and a whisper, just a whisper from you.

~*~*~*~*~

To all silent inspirations …

Mood – Stateless- Bloodstream song.

“The sound of silence” by Christina on deviantart.com

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© 2011  Broken Sparkles


53 Responses to “In the silence”

  1. Eric Says:

    I feel the longing, a wanting for hope.

    Your tag list is almost as long as your poem. (LOL!)

  2. deadpoet88 Says:

    Wonderful poem Bee! I love the depth of passion in this one :) Gives a distant feel to it, as if loving from so far away. I think I know why :)

  3. ladynimue Says:

    Oh Blaga ..If words could melt , consider yours did that just the same to me !! I am all so so loveyyy…

  4. liv2write2day Says:

    Blaga, there is a beautifully haunting quality to this poem (and the picture lends to that). I just read it outloud and the words are (the only description I can think of) delicious. I may cull a few of them for a wordle for my Monday Morning Writing Prompt, if you don’t mind.

  5. eclipseofthemoon Says:

    Enchanting….you used the words so beautifully. An excellent poem

  6. Jamie Dedes Says:

    Reads almost like some ancient canticle. Certainly evokes a sense of yearning. I love the whimisical kiss. Nice touch. Several nice images. Well done!

    Thanks for your visits and reads on my site. You are so kind.

    Have a fine day …

  7. Sam Says:

    sometimes a whisper is all we need… loved it.

  8. Olivia Says:

    Intense..
    I have been there myself.. and void is all I earned.. each time!

    Very well written.. the music I’m listening to is just perfect for this post! The Phantom of the Opera on our FB profile!

    Many Hugs
    xxxxx

  9. Reggie Says:

    I get a deep sense of wanting in this read, and that is because you have written it well.

  10. seabell Says:

    What can I say? Just beautiful!

  11. Jessica Says:

    Great sense of longing here, Blaga!
    I like the phrase ‘the taste of a whimsical kiss’.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/04/18/my-favourite-things-not/

  12. Marlee-I Mystic Says:

    I can feel the raw, pure emotion. Great piece!

  13. bendedspoon Says:

    you’re too much…now I’m dreaming :)

  14. April Denton Says:

    Absolutely beautiful!

  15. Jingle Says:

    vibrating words.
    wow.

    love it.

    A++

  16. lunawitch15 Says:

    great write, and tagging! lol.

  17. dragonkatet Says:

    I hope that by putting it into words, you invite it to become reality, Blaga! This was really well done. It had a dreamlike, surreal quality to it that lent itself well to the subject matter.

  18. BUTTERFLIES OF TIME Says:

    Longing , romance, passsion and love
    understated yet overflowing
    with Melody and Grace as two bridesmaids
    Blaga ,may your lovely poems keep flowing.

    And I am back in action!

  19. A.B. Thomas Says:

    Wow, simply wow and the image selection..c’est magnifique

  20. Sajeevs blog Says:

    Your words have weaved a very romantic mood in this poem:-)

  21. Bonniestormcloud Says:

    Wonderful!! Indigo a color so wonderful I love my own Indigo Moon. Your descriptive words bring this piece to life.

    Blessed Be )o(

  22. Iris D Says:

    paper smile is all I have.
    very beautiful line and lovely poem.
    Iris

  23. Cherlyn Says:

    Oh Blaga, you just have too much talent! You always find a way to bring anything to life, and paint a vivid image in my mind! Thank you so much for sharing :)

  24. mairmusic Says:

    I was searching your blog for a poem, and am happy to find this one. Thanks!


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