Eventide given away

Te extraño

Every eventide of
humid grasp with you,
was locked with
the amaranth satin
on the king size bed
and I gave it away to
the poor guy looking
for blanket on the street.

Every solemn oath
penetrating the silence
after the flight in April,
echoed in barbarian Latin,
harassing the treaty of peace
and I borrowed it to
the scout without speech
for his first victory in a battle.

Every “te amo”
written with lipstick
on the silk of my back
was burning the surface
of my sensuous portrait
and I shared it with
the bubbles in the bath,
ready to forget your glance.

Every blissful tear
after an illusion with you
was knitted in the steps
of our dance at night,
killing every sad twilight
and I donated that too,
to the ballerina in “Swan lake”,
she needed extra sparkles.

And now, counting the sullen
remains of your presence, it’s been
more than an hour that
I listen to “Noviembre sin ti”
and I wonder, why nobody
told me how perilous
one simple song can be …

~*~*~*~*~

Te extraño – I miss you

Te amo – I love you

Noviembre sin ti – November without you

Inspired by “Noviembre sin ti”- Reik

~*~*~*~*~

"Don't miss you at all" by don Paolo on deviantart.com

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© 2011  Broken Sparkles

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36 Responses to “Eventide given away”

  1. dragonkatet Says:

    What a beautiful piece full of beautiful images and acts of kindness! How do you say “I love your poetry”? :)

  2. deadpoet88 Says:

    Wow, this leaves me speechless. You bring out that feeling for longing so well, and I love how you weave a few words of other languages in to your poetry. Gives it so much more feeling. It was sad to see everything getting donated though…the memories they hold.

    Simply beautiful Bee!

  3. Amropali Says:

    This is amazing.

    Brilliant read, first thing in the morning.

  4. Julian Javier the Cyber Mushroom Says:

    nicely done! choice of words gave more emotion to it!

    please check mine too: “Beyond Silent Wars”

  5. Neeraja Says:

    Wow!!! This is so beautiful. Such lovely words Blaga. Loved it.

  6. Paulami Says:

    loved the flow of the poetry. it is just beautiful :)

  7. Jamie Dedes Says:

    A voluptuous poem written in midnight blue. Simply sensual and sumptuous. Bravo, Blaga. So very well done. “Every “te amo” written with lipstick on the silk of my back” = memorable. Thank you! :-)

  8. Sam Says:

    simply WoW Blaga… And thanks for reminding me of Grace Jones… ;-)

  9. bendedspoon Says:

    Wow! If the ballerina in “Swan lake”, needed extra sparkles — you don’t! You sparkle brilliantly!

    Congratulations! :)

  10. Chimnese Says:

    so….so…enchanting, charming,loving, beautiful…you wow me with your poetry….

  11. timkeen40 Says:

    Wow! This is beautiful. I am glad I found this.

  12. Eric Says:

    I hear your heart in this one, Blaga. Very nice.

  13. fiveloaf Says:

    speechless.. and this is how poems should be!

  14. seabell Says:

    Music has always a deep impact… All sensual and a great read!

  15. Vinay Says:

    ah, the music returns, and the poem is saddening, yet sensual.. powerful in lots of ways..!

  16. Ina Says:

    This is so beautiful!

  17. Olivia Says:

    One of your bests!
    Blaga, I am absolutely speechless- so wouldn’t hunt for any words either..

    Hugs xox

  18. anummunaf Says:

    OMG
    THESE words are soo perfect :)
    best of luck :)

  19. tasithoughts Says:

    Great work, Blaga. Magnificent!

  20. BUTTERFLIES OF TIME Says:

    Simply soft and sparkling piece of poetry Blaga! love your way of letting go even as love shines through in your words.

  21. dunstancarter Says:

    Strong poem with real emotion and sadness

  22. robin the dreamer Says:

    love the vibe and photo… award definitely justified :)

  23. Alethea Says:

    Hey Blaga, it’s been a long time. Hope you still remember me ;)
    This left me speechless! Beautifully composed.

  24. PinkLady Says:

    what a haunting piece… truly lovely!

  25. meirozavian Says:

    I love your poem, its beautiful.

  26. Neezes Says:

    Fantastic use of words, emotional, well structured… I enjoyed this one a lot.

  27. Purvi Says:

    You are one fantastic poet . U echo all of what I feel and my friend must do.. for reasons different each.. Thanks for sharing.

  28. Dream Trekker Says:

    beautifully written.

  29. Melissa Says:

    Oh this is great and this stanza is my fav

    “Every “te amo”
    written with lipstick
    on the silk of my back
    was burning the surface
    of my sensuous portrait
    and I shared it with
    the bubbles in the bath,
    ready to forget your glance.”

    Just beautiful!!

  30. A.B. Thomas Says:

    Its flow and want just washes over the words in the most extrodinary way – loved the write!

  31. Cherlyn Says:

    This is amazing. The feeling of longing and yearning is so well versed in this poem, that I actually feel quite sad now. This was magnificent, so wonderful – thank you for sharing!

  32. luna15 Says:

    this is tragic and lovely. and yes i know the song well, well done!

  33. ALIVE aLwaYs Says:

    That was beautiful with a hint of longing and at last the realization.
    Songs are experiences of people we sure can relate to.

  34. Jingle Says:

    moving, sadness makes music more heartfelt.

    Happy Potluck.

  35. mindlovemisery Says:

    I am completely in love with the 3rd stanza. This is just stunning. I am lyrically challenged but you fabulous


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