Magic world

Magic world

Strange music and late Saturday night,
half a glass of champagne and the bubbles,
chasing blood in my veins made out of rain.

Headache, aspirin and your touch
crumbled in a spoon with strawberry taste,
whisking wonders, holding tales about

castles in green, wizard’s kiss and I feel Queen.
Amber shadows dancing in the arms of  lions
and the edges of my silk gown sending me back to reality.

The same music again, but early Sunday morning,
too loud to see anything shining, instead  I hear
smoky windows moving in opposite directions and

the scent of the pillow next to me,
the smile on your face lettered with whispers,
escaping winters, reviving magic worlds.


“Dreamscape” by Brittany Smith/elestrial/ on


© 2010  Broken Sparkles


29 Responses to “Magic world”

  1. WordsWorthMillions Says:

    Sensuous as always. You really sound like a queen -queen of her man’s heart. The illustration is stunning and so is the poem. A much deserving entry. :)

  2. Heart Says:

    Agree with WWM from above! Also great dream poetry from you Blaga! And you have done justice to your favorite words, “everything that we loved together, how can I hate now?”..
    Nice contrast between present and your imaginary dream world.. ! Well done!

  3. david waters Says:

    OHHHHHHHHHHHHH I loved this…sensual, sexy…lusty and beautiful.

  4. Panda Wolf Says:

    I love the language used. It really feels romantic.

    Thank you for the link. :]

  5. LeiffyV Says:

    Ah, you had a different experience than I did with my hangover… hehe

    Great stuff as always, very sensual and loving. Thank you for sharing!

  6. Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved Says:

    Magical and sensual and very, very you, Blaga. Well done. Happy potluck. Good choice and I appreciate the explaination at the top. Poem on, my friends.

  7. danroberson Says:

    Filled me with magical wishes of my own. Very romantic and sensual. You have that romantic touch. Again a beautiful poem.

  8. mairmusic Says:

    You have created a world apart!

  9. Tom Baker Says:

    Very interesting subject Blaga. This is another one of those great poems that I come here for. How are you doing and how have you been? I hope all is well and hope you have a great week.

  10. Cherlyn Says:

    I love it! It reminds me of a more sensual, sexual, hangover. I wish my hangover this weekend was like that haha. I’ve really been enjoying how your style has been adapting in these past weeks, every poem has a unique flow to it :) Great job!!

  11. Jessicas Japes Says:

    You seem to have a one – track mind! LOL
    very good, another mystery man – where do you find them all!!

  12. Jingle Says:

    dreamy magic,
    love the image,
    sweet entry, thanks for sharing with potluck.
    Happy Monday.

  13. Eric Says:

    All worlds are but shadows of Amber.
    (Roger Zelazny told me so!)

  14. kaykuala Says:

    How touching! It leaves you with a nice feeling. You did well to spend time on the last stanza. It was the cream on the beautiful cake. Great!

  15. Talon Says:

    This was so soft and lyrical and the imagery divine.

    My potluck –

  16. Chris G. Says:

    How far a touch can take us – I’m sure the aspirin helps a bit though. Smooth piece, flows well, with a good rhythm and that satisfying overarch of romance all through it. A delight!

    “the scent of the pillow next to me,
    the smile on your face lettered with whispers,
    escaping winters, reviving magic worlds.”

    Sensuous and sublime description.

  17. ScottlB Says:

    Again another great write, now I know why I added your blog to my favorites :) thank you for sharing my friend.

  18. Shashi Says:

    I enjoyd it.. its so beautiful and sensitive…
    Thanks for sharing…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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  19. Reflections Says:

    Lovely… sensual words, magic in the making. Dreams of wizardry I would say.

  20. Sumit Sarkar Says:

    I like this poem :)

  21. haisley Says:

    very romantic and sweet

  22. Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved Says:

    I love Pachelbel. How sweet of you to send it. Thank you, Blaga.

    For you:

  23. deadpoet88 Says:

    Lovely romantic and passionate poem, really liked the imagery.

  24. Luke Prater Says:

    Loving the tercet structure… mwahahhahaa you are falling under my influence… hehe just kidding. I think I already critiqued this on the board, no?

    Warmest Salad

    Luke x

  25. Jingle Says:

    Please claim awards/treats by clicking on entry #115…
    Thanks for the beautiful contribution to week 11, hope to see you next Monday!
    Happy Thursday!
    Happy Thanksgiving Holiday if you celebrate!

  26. megzone Says:

    aaahhhh lovely poem there and wat a breathtaking pic :)

  27. Evelyn Says:

    “Headache, aspirin and your touch
    crumbled in a spoon with strawberry taste”
    You surprise me with the words you string together and still conjure clear images…

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