Sleeping mistake

Sleeping mistake

You are not my Divine Being or my Demonic Master,
though last night’s wanted ravish,
could’ve been “sent from Heaven”.
Nothing holds my worship over you,
even after few moments, shame only delusional.

You are the aftermath of
seven glasses filled with champagne,
spinning head and scared logic.
You are just a sleeping mistake
on my bed, covered with purple satin.


“Purple satin” by BlackDragynStock on DeviantArt


 © 2010  Broken Sparkles


6 Responses to “Sleeping mistake”

  1. Cherlyn Says:

    I see you used a different version of this poem :) I do like this one a lot, I think with just the two stanzas you really convey the intended message. As I said before, I think it’s a great poem, and I love the sensuality of it – something I usually stray from!

  2. Talon Says:

    The second stanza is so brilliant, I think it could stand alone. Just lovely writing!

  3. Chris G. Says:

    Like the divine twist to this little bit of sensuality – a mistake perhaps, but it does seem so good at the time. Both stanzas are good though I feel almost as if each could stand alone as their own poem. Nice contribution to the potluck!

  4. Just Veli Says:

    Still loving you and your work, Rock On! :) xx

  5. revbillcook Says:

    I enjoyed this. Particularly the second stanza. Very effective writing. – bill

  6. Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved Says:

    Saying what he is not is more powerful than saying what he is. Nice work, Blaga. Enjoyed much. Thank you!

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