Libertango

Libertango

She wanted to dance, just one last time,
to grab the violin strings of Libertango,
the triumph and the spice of breaking dawn.

If only he was here, with last summer hand in hand.
If only the blue eyes could strike the crying fragrance.
The rest is all in vain, colorless and in pain.

Two steps back, high heels and the dress black.
Two steps ahead and a grip to make her sway.
Dancing tango, steps and pyre, their tango.

Slaves of the rhythm so known,
he will close the embrace, she will lead the chase,
flowing vigor and the ground walking drizzle.

She would seduce him, let all shields down,
he would follow the breath, let her rest on his chest,
and the music will veil the faces once pale.

On and off beats, on and off bodies,
wrapped legs, arms like arrows,
flash on silky lips in a horizontal move at eclipse.

And the crowd, hearts and lives on pause,
staring eyes, filling caves, stealing grace,
striving riots of somber days with hail.

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“Tango arrow” by Adel Sanoussi /Need2Argue/ on deviantart.com

 © 2010  Broken Sparkles

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34 Responses to “Libertango”

  1. danroberson Says:

    This poem is love standing, moving seductively to a horizontal position, while the crowd waits expectantly.
    Very fluid and beautiful. Great poem!

  2. Jamie Dedes Says:

    What a graceful fantacy. Just lovely, Blaga! Thank you. Makes for a nice start to my day.

  3. WordsWorthMillions Says:

    Another sensuous fantasy. Brilliantly written with very vivid images.

  4. melissalicia Says:

    LOVE LOVE LOVE!! So vivid!

  5. cherlyn Says:

    Another wonderful poem! It has been absolutely wonderful to see your literary style grow and evolve, and I am absolutely certain that it is only going to keep getting better :)

  6. Tom Baker Says:

    Sexy and seductive. How have you been Blaga? Well choreographed poem. Too bad I can’t dance!

  7. Just Veli Says:

    Still loving you and your work, Rock On! :) xx

  8. June_Butterfly Says:

    Seductively Beautiful.For once in my life I wish I could dance Tango!Your words brought the longing tenthfold.

    Absolutely Sexy piece,Blaga!

  9. Talon Says:

    “the triumph and the spice of breaking dawn” – what gorgeous imagery!

    The entire poem sings with the beauty of the dance.

  10. Olivia Says:

    I am moving with the music now that you have created here..!
    Blaga Bubble.. this is so sensational!!

    Wishing you all my Love xxx

  11. Jessicas Japes Says:

    Lovely description of the couple and the romance of dancing!

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/06/snow/

  12. Reflections Says:

    Fluid graceful dance of your words, leading to that one final moment of expectancy from the crowd, meant for only two…

  13. Chris G. Says:

    Now there’s a dream – a longing. Splendid imagery, really kicks up the beauty of the dance, and the spice of the romance – she wants to tango again, but there is so much more to it! Splendidly vivid visuals and desires.

  14. fiveloaf Says:

    wow! the spirit of the dance is captured nicely.. lovely scent!

  15. ScottlB Says:

    May I have the next dance? :) very nice flowing words.
    http://words4afriend.wordpress.com/2010/12/06/plateau/

  16. deadpoet88 Says:

    Amazing! The tango is such a seductive dance, and your poem brings it out perfectly! Great piece!

  17. Jingle Says:

    dynamic,
    your image sets me in mood..
    fabulous entry..

    Happy Potluck!

    A++

  18. NV Says:

    Beautiful, for someone who loves dancing its somehow a slice of their everyday life. :-)

  19. Helena Malheur Says:

    Excellent piece of writing… such gorgeous imagery and language here. Loved it!

  20. Desert Rose Says:

    that was soo beautiful! i am always fascinated with Tango..:) the feeling of intimacy and fragile power in the ticking steps touch me..loved how you portrayed this love and beauty of the dance..great flow!
    happy to be here..:)

  21. Cheryl Says:

    A mix of sensuality with the fluidity of dance. How breathtaking. This is beautiful, Blaga. I love the photos you choose to complement your poetry. Simply perfect.

    ~ C

  22. belladonna23 Says:

    i loved this…so romantic, so enticing and sensual
    great poem, happy potluck :)


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