He

He

He is 6’2″ tall, robust and hardy,
with muscles evenly distributed
on the vision of mortal essence.

His hair brown,
darker reddish shade of brown,
whirls of golden Autumn in October .

The eyes green,
ordinary, uneventfully green,
if it wasn’t for the glimpse of danger within.

His lips, Humphrey kissing Ingrid in Casablanca.
And the voice,deep, I needn’t to say,
the imprint akin to the glory of peacock’s tail.

His hands, rough,
the baseball bats swaying at NY Yankees ballpark,
didn’t spare the harm of elegance or howl charm.

The attitude,strong, disturbingly motionless, sedate.
Crusty exterior, so much to offer,
but not before you’ve pushed the right buttons.

The name- Christian, Adam or Damon, maybe!
Even Azazel is fine by me,
Satan’s addiction, Angel’s betrayal,

who the hell cares,
as long as I have him,
in a dreamless sleep next to me.

`

“Man at sleep” by Virginie Turpin / Youkha/ on deviantart.com

 © 2010  Broken Sparkles

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47 Responses to “He”

  1. Olivia Says:

    I am already melted- do you see me puddling on the floor around..?
    What a way to welcome Sunday Evening.. very well done Blaga Girl.. xoxox

  2. Elena Says:

    Много хубаво Бугинце, като стане ясно името на човека- да го споделиш :)

  3. Heart Says:

    Ahem, ahem – Fiction, ‘He’ seems to be real..!! Definitely not Greek and Latin to me, unlike the comments ;)
    Sexy romantic one Blaga.. This one went right out of the ball park!!
    :)

    • Scent of my heart Says:

      Rachana, I’ve tried and the Greek and the Latin men :), now even my dreams and fictional thoughts avoid them! Lol, I wish “He” was real! Thanks for stopping by!

  4. Cherlyn Says:

    Hmmm I have one word to describe a man like that – delicious. Now that’s a type of man I’d like to meet, got any spares kicking around? haha.

    Great job again Blaga! I really like the line “Satan’s addiction, Angel’s betrayal”, it has a really great flow to it.

    Hope you have a great day!

  5. Jamie Dedes Says:

    If you’re gonna dream, you might as well dream like this. Good job, Blaga!

  6. Luke Prater Says:

    hmmmm this rings a bell… nice piece Blaga, and you know I ain’t just saying that!

    Cheers my friend

    Luke (catch you on the Group later, gator)

  7. Luke Prater Says:

    Hey but what happened to the ‘surfacing from dreamless sleep into me/into my arms’? Ah, maybe yours is better :))

    • Scent of my heart Says:

      I know you said I can use it :),it didn’t feel right to copy and paste somebody else’s line, but I kept dreamless sleep :) It was what I liked the most! I know you ain’t just saying it :) and after couple of private teachers, I hope there will be another one you will like! Thanks Luke! See you when I have a bit more time to read later on! xoxox

  8. Jingle Says:

    wow, dear poetess,

    you make me smile, love your unbeatable imagination here.
    very well plotted piece….

    http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/08/my-sister-lives-too-far-away/

    here is one of my entries,
    a poetry award 4 you and thank you for your support on week 9 potluck fun.
    Enjoy!
    xxx

  9. Chris G. Says:

    Some people build structures–your structure takes shape into a man. Nicely done, an imaginative piece that certainly seems to have gotten the ladies here in agreement with your vision…

  10. RiikaInfinityy 마왕 Says:

    I cannot say how much I loving this…welcome to the dark side, my friend :3~~~~haha! Happy Poetry Potluck!:P

  11. fiveloaf Says:

    haha fun! who cares right?

  12. thoughtsnotlost Says:

    I need to find me one of those!! haha. Loved this!

  13. Jessicas Japes Says:

    Whoa! I was getting quite hot by the end of that!!
    Great read. Now you have to tell us who your guy really is!

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/08/my-fortress/

    • Scent of my heart Says:

      Jessica :) my guy is a Scandinavian man, probably with something french in the family tree too, living in North America /USA or Canada/ for many years and he has the attitude of the people living there. He plays baseball and likes complicated and serious movies, Charles Bukowski books, thai food maybe is his favorite, Armani perfumes and jeans. He doesn’t drink, apart from a beer or two in a company, he maybe smokes, but that’s fine! He is calm and confident when at hard times, he could be also sensitive and sweet, but only with me :)! He is way too perfect to be real :)!

      • Jessica Says:

        Well, there’s no harm in looking for him!! And probably a touch of George Clooney and/or Johnny Depp thrown in?? LOL

        • Scent of my heart Says:

          haha yes something like this, or something in between Rupert-Penry Jones and Alen Delon, but with the attitude of Ret from “Gone with the wind”!

  14. mairmusic Says:

    now this is a romantic poem with some meat on its bones! Nicely done!

  15. thisistalon Says:

    This was fun to read…hope someone lives up to the dreamstate for you :)

  16. ScottlB Says:

    this is a very sensual piece, in a dreamless or dreaming one you don’t want to end.

  17. Giovanni Says:

    Comparing his voice to a peacock’s tail is fantastic.
    Well done!

  18. Shashi Says:

    So beautiful painting of Him. I enjoyed it so much and the last lines were too beautiful.
    Thanks for sharing…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

  19. Tom Baker Says:

    Very sexy Blaga. You write some of the most thought provoking poetry I know. Casablanca, huh? Great flick.

  20. WordsWorthMillions Says:

    Beautiful. A very true picture of ‘him’ you painted here.

  21. uma.a Says:

    a romantic poem..absolutely loved it

  22. wiserskydiver Says:

    someones been having some wild dreams :P
    handsome poem… Cheers!!!

  23. The Reason You Come Says:

    You had me at “6’2″ tall”! ;) Your words brought back memories of nights when I used to imagine who my “He” would be. Your poem is both sweet and hot (which is a really good combination, IMO).

  24. chamz Says:

    He is lovely. ;)

  25. Just Veli Says:

    Love this, and him, but love you more! :) xx

  26. Judy Marie Santiago Says:

    Oh yeah, Blaga! :) I really picture him as a gorgeous man! :) But no thanks, I have my dream guy with me already! Haha! But I deeply hope and pray that HE will find you! Hugs and love, Judy. :)


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