Paradise

Paradise

For one endless pleasure
that leads to a passion night,
for one golden touch
that makes you kiss me so innocent,
let you and me together
get lost in paradise.

At one place of peace
and lights in blue around,
at one place for us
and sound of voices with charm,
let we ignore the morning
and breathe the night.

After one word of love,
fulfilled with meaning so sweet,
after one act of lust,
defined by silky skin,
let me dream in my sleep
and let you guard this dream in our paradise.

*~*~*~*~*

“Paradise” by Angel Kirilov

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© 2010  Broken Sparkles


17 Responses to “Paradise”

  1. Stephen Kellogg Says:

    Blaga,
    Wonderful photo and poem combo! I like the imagery in this poem and the last line “let me dream in my sleep
    and let you guard this dream in our paradise!”

    Great ending to what sounds like a wonderful time!

    Peace,

    Stephen

  2. Cherlyn Says:

    Another great one Blaga! I really enjoy the whole last stanza, it’s really sensual and romantic! :)

  3. Jingle Says:

    super beautiful image!

  4. dan Says:

    A beautiful poem that is full of love, dreams, and happiness leading to paradise. Excellent!

  5. Jingle Says:

    For one endless pleasure
    that leads to a passion night,
    for one golden touch
    that makes you kiss me so innocent,
    let you and me together
    get lost in paradise!..

    enjoyed the flow.
    paradise is cool to be…
    Happy Potluck!

  6. LeiffyV Says:

    Wonderfully done, the subtle dance and the tension between two lovers is sweet. Thanks for sharing with us!

  7. Cheryl Says:

    A romantic night set to words. How beautiful and sensual. Well done, Blaga.

    ~ C

  8. Jessica Says:

    A very lovely, romantic poem.
    ‘Kiss me so innocent’ is a great phrase.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/20/one-second/

  9. tekia Says:

    A beautiful poem with great imagery. I enjoyed my read. Bravo!

  10. lovelyannie79 Says:

    I love the idea of guarding a dream…especially this intimate paradise! beautiful experiential poem

  11. Marlee-I Mystic Says:

    Great visual of a paradise we all experience at one point or another. Great job, and great picture

  12. anurag Says:

    hey,

    those lines were quite soothing,sensual, hint of romance.
    I HaVE a query here “does the theme of the poem has to do anything with the pic ?”

  13. A.B. Thomas Says:

    A very sensual write, and the photograph, magnificent!

  14. Sumit Sarkar Says:

    What a wonderful picture…definitely a paradise…
    and you have captured it in words so beautifully.. :)

  15. WordsWorthMillions Says:

    Passionate as always amiga. I love your love poems. Hope you are having fine. It has been crazy this side. Merry Christmas.

    http://wordsworthmillions.wordpress.com/2010/05/12/coaxing-the-sleepy-angel


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