I heard you again

 

I heard you again


I heard you again in my heart, in my veins, in between adrenaline and hot blood.
With the last wave of the sea inflow, saying you’re coming soon.
With the drops of rain falling unmercifully, showing you’re staying this time.
I heard you again in my head, not as a fantasy in my sleep, it was real.

I felt again your intense devotion, your eagerness for ardor, for passion.
With the fresh air of the spring coming, whispering you’re lost without me.
With the roses that blossom on my balcony, proving you were born to be with me.
I felt again your love, your dreams and your hopes for a new tomorrow.

I know again with my soul, with my mind, with my six senses.
I could see it with my eyes, feel it in your voice.
With the sun that shines inside of me every time I think of you.
With the river that flows inside of you every time you dream of me.

I know for sure, I am so in love again and so are you …


Image by RedSheep Photography

 

© 2010  Broken Sparkles


26 Responses to “I heard you again”

  1. Tom Baker Says:

    Beautiful poem Blaga. I pictured the rain falling and the roses. Somebody is in love!

  2. Jingle Says:

    Glad that you hear and used your six senses.
    well done.
    your image is always amazing.

  3. Someone Is Special Says:

    this was a beautiful poem.. loved it..

    Three Knots

    Happy Rally !

    –Someone Is Special–

  4. ScottlB Says:

    Very good, nothing like being in love a wonderful feeling

  5. Dr Madan Goyal Says:

    Loving hearts beat in rhythum and echo in each other’s mind and body.
    Beautiful craft of emotions.

  6. Kumi Says:

    Whats the sound of love like?

  7. Jessicas Japes Says:

    Very beautiful and very powerful in its expression of your love!

  8. thoughtsnotlost Says:

    Gorgeous, beautiful..love. Great job!

  9. tanznb Says:

    Beautiful work…. Great job! Looking forward for more poems :)

  10. G. K. Asante Says:

    Intensely charming piece.

  11. The Reason You Come Says:

    Beautiful! I know these are your words, but it’s as though you captured my feelings for my fiancé. I want to run to him now and say these words. I guess all of us who are in love have similar emotions. :)

  12. Shashi Says:

    Dear Blaga

    I enjoyed your love song very much… I can feel the pleasure in your words and love in your thoughts… Your words like “With the river that flows inside of you every time you dream of me.” made me think deeper. I have always loved river and sea, and I believe them to be a great source of positivity and you used them both for conveying sense of love… I liked this one. thanks
    One more thing, you mentioned six sense, it was great see love as another sense…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

  13. Morganna Says:

    Wow. What a beautiful, loving poem.

  14. Jamie Dedes Says:

    I love that idea of hearing a love once again. Nice! Well wrought poem. Perfect choice for sharing wht Rally.

    Poem on …

  15. Shashi Says:

    Oh Yes, my fault Blaga… I realise that now… one of the great Hindi writer Munshi Premchand wrote about this sense in 1920’s.

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya

  16. industrialarts Says:

    Nice play on love, ardor and hot blood, allowed me to feel the author’s trip through the heart…

  17. Marit Says:

    there is a lot of repetition in this which adds to the excitement and burst of feeling

  18. Leo (Leonnyes) Says:

    the repetition works very well, Blaga :D nicely written poem..

  19. yuuki-chan Says:

    Love can sometimes be an epiphany of sorts or a slow kindling fire. :)
    I love the repetition happening in the piece.
    :)

  20. WordsWorthMillions Says:

    Hot blood, roses, and love!

    Very vivid images and a very romantic poem.

    http://wordsworthmillions.wordpress.com/2010/11/06/my-religion/

  21. Neha Says:

    You have such a beautiful way of involving everything around you in your poetry — and pull your readers to do the same.

  22. RASHMI Says:

    Beautiful poem……..


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